Ok uh...I'm sorry but, this, no joke, is WAY to Egoraptor. I know people use that as an 'in-joke' but I'm serious. The art style is retro Raptor for Metal Gear Awesome 1, and I'm sorry, this isn't really that funny either. Even Fox's voice sounds as close to Ego-Solid Snake as it could get.
Overall, the concept was fine, and could have been executed a little better. Though I must admit, Kudos on killing Slippy a lot. I'm unsure of how many submissions you have made to Newgrounds, but I do wish you the best on future projects. I think you have talent, and potential, but just not on this project. Maybe it was intentional to be this way, a homage maybe?